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Storytelling Structure

What The Rise of Skywalker Can Teach about Storytelling

Tomas Pueyo
8 min readDec 31, 2019

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Why The Sequel Trilogy Is Completely Inconsistent

In The Rise of Skywalker, this is Rey’s list of To Dos:

  • Get intel about the existence of the Emperor and where he is.
  • Realize you need to find the wayfinder.
  • Go to Pasaana to find the wayfinder. Get a dagger with Sith inscriptions instead.
  • Travel to Kijimi to translate the inscriptions.
  • Retrieve the dagger and Chewie from the destroyer.
  • Go to Kef Bir to find the wayfinder.

And this is just in the first half of the movie. Everything is so rushed, that there are plot holes everywhere. To name just a few:

  • Poe Dameron jumps to lightspeed several times without programming, always landing in weird places, never hitting anything while on lightspeed, but very closely missing obstacles when in normal speed

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Tomas Pueyo
Tomas Pueyo

Written by Tomas Pueyo

2 MSc in Engineering. Stanford MBA. Ex-Consultant. Creator of applications with >20M users. Currently leading a billion-dollar business @ Course Hero

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